Friday, 1 August 2014

We are learning to use authors as teachers.  I read some writing from Marci Ridlon.  This is my writing inspired by her.

I really like the way I have used some of her words in my writing.  This helped me to be a better writer


  1. Hey Brother, Oh my goodness, as I read your Poem i stopped and thought how much your writing has improved. Did you make that up by yourself from all the memories of Summer ? Next time you should consider your Punctuation.

  2. Hi Ngakau I like your work.My favourite slid is slid one because it is really neat and clear. Nexd time you should make the slid slower.