Monday, 25 August 2014

Going to monument hill

I remember when Miss Nicola took Room 4 up to Monument hill. We all walked up  in the hot sun. It was really tiring walking up the hill. I  felt like i want to be a bird and fly up over the trees. Looking far away the blue trees where really tiny. The church was as small as a ant.  I saw a long gone volcano. I liked how the hills where sticking out.Screenshot 2014-08-25 at 10.52.57.png

1 comment:

  1. I love the way you write. You make your reader smile because they can really feel what it's like to be there. Kia toa! Try some personification!